Sub-Zero- Deep Konquest – Volume 1|Welcome to Sub-Zero deep conquest. The story which follows our favourite warrior; Sub-Zero. His quest is interesting and he has shown to be one of the most talented ninjas due to his Uncanny ice powers. He is my favourite so i have decided to make several Chapters on his life. These stories strongly relate to the actual MK storyline and is not made up. I first started this in the MKC Board but i found it a hobbie all the way through. I hope you enjoy reading them as i enjoy writing them. Thanx – Flame
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Sub-Zero: Deep Conquest 1 – Meteora Effect
The cold-hearted warrior looks down at the Lin Kuei tribe. The grand master then silences the group. He speaks his lost wise words, ‘The Grand Master of the Lin kuei is dead, murdered by one of our own. It was an act of tertiary. THE MURDERER is subzero who now and forever will be a mortal enemy of the Lin kuei. One of us will hunt him, one of us will kill him…. It will be… Smoke’. A mixture of emotions ran through the mind of subzero as he saw the gloomy grey figure of a cyber-netic robotic ninja appear down below him. There was silence. Then Sub-Zero stepped back making a silent crunch. Then as the split second this happened, smoke screamed in a deep voice ‘Master, my prey is here, he has been watching us all this time.’. The reply was quick, ‘Do what you need to smoke, SILENCE HIM!’. As smoke jumped on to the roof where subzero was crouching. Sub-zero got up. He stared into his friends new-face. ‘Smoke! It’s me sub-zero, don’t give into that evil. My friend.. My brother.’ ‘I do not know this weak pathetic fool you speak of. All you must know is that you will die, by my hands.’ A spear from his arm shot through his metal skin. Subzero moved his arms, creating an ice-ball. Throwing it at the spear. The spear split making two to come in opposite directions. Subzero kicked smoke, screaming ‘you have a soul, smoke. Don’t give in.’. ‘I don’t have a soul you weak fool’. A mini rocket seemed to appear in smokes chest. And then.. ‘Enough!’ A portal appeared in the middle of the floor, everyone looked in amazement. The grand master bowed down; soon everyone did the same accept sub-zero. ‘It’s the emperor… BOW!’ the grand master shouted. An echoing strong deep voice shattered through the darkness.
‘Grand Master, you have let my chance of killing the champion known as Kung Lao slip once again through my fingers. It is your fault. YOU RUINED MY CHANCE! for that you must pay. YOU WILL DIE!’
‘Emperor it is not my fault, don’t be blind. I respect you but there was a traitor in our group. Sub-Zero’
‘Was this the strong warrior who deceived us and joined Kung Lao and killed the grand master and scorpions partner?’
‘Yes.’
‘Very well, how about you hunting him and send him to me. I may have a better chance, with a warrior like him around.’
‘He is here already, you may have him.’
‘Very well’
A red mist appeared around sub-zero. He started to choke. It was to hot for him. It was boiling. The temperature kept rising. Everything kept becoming dark for him. The first minute he can see smoke and the next he can see. Total darkness….
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Sub-Zero: Deep Conquest 2 – Khan’s Deal
‘Wake Up! Ice Man’… Sub-Zero threw a ice punch, and in that same second the figure in front of him shielded him self. Sub-Zero soon became aware of his surroundings. He was in front of the emperor Shoa Khan, he looked around. And then the emperor spoke…
‘You look a little paranoid, traitor..’
‘Where am I?’
‘Out world’
‘How… The first minute I was… when… WHY?’
‘You have betrayed your own clan; I have need for you sub-zero! Join me and fight against earthrealm in Mortal Kombat!’
‘Never shall I bow or do things for you.’
‘I tell you what… Ill set a deal’
‘Your deals don’t interest me coward.’
‘WATCH YOUR MOUTH!.. Before I have your head on a platter! The deal is that if you win the following 2 matches, I will let you go. But if you loose, you and your soul will be a slave to my servant shang sung. You will then aid him on the attack of earthrealm in the Mortal Kombat tournaments.’
‘Agreed, where are these two fighters?’
‘Beat the first one and you will be faced with the second one! Your first fighter will be… Cyrax come forth!’
A Lin Kuei cyber-netic robot stepped in from the darkness and spoke ‘You will die!’
Subzero leaped in to the mini Kombat arena. Cyrax followed. Cyrax punched sub-zero in stomach leaving sub-zero winded. Cyrax kicked subzero in the face, then kicked his back. Sub-zero stood back. And in a second a ice ball was formed, he threw it at the robo-ninja. Cyrax froze. Subzero leaped in air and kicked him. Cyrax’s arm smashed in to pieces of ice. Soon Cyrax defrosted and in a split second wires came from his back. The robots wires ripped apart sub-zeros mask. Now subzero was un-masked. Cyrax punched subzero in his face. A gush of blood rushed through his bleeding mouth. Sub-zero used his ice-kicks on Cyrax. Cyrax was standing still, it seemed that his sensors are jammed. Shoa Khan spoke ‘FINISH HIM SUBZERO! He is weak!’. With anger subzero backed up behind Cyrax. With no mercy subzero pierced through Cyrax’s back bone. And after a second he pulled the Robot Ninjas spine leaving a mush of wires and flesh. The ice warrior dropped the spine. Kold blood dripped down his fingers.
‘Shao Khan, I killed this one. May I have a rest before facing the second?’
‘In Mortal Kombat you don’t have rests! Now you may face your second opponent. One day you may thank me….’
Subzero looked in the darkness and could see a figure… He knew who it was. Then Shao Khan spoke ‘Scorpion… Come forth!’.. A second later a serpent like spear shot through the darkness and a deep voice was heard.. ‘GET OVER HERE!’
Flame : Sub-Zero: Deep Conquest 3 – Kombat Begins
Sub-Zero stared deeply at scorpion. ‘We meet again scorpion. This time I will kill you… die!’. As he spoke sub-zero flipped on to the area in front of Shoa Khan. Scorpion screamed ‘COME HERE!’. Two serpent like creatures came in opposite directions. Sub-zero dodged them both with out suspecting the punch smashing in to his chest…
The ice ninja fell on the floor, weakened by Cyrax and now Scorpion.
‘Just Like Last time. You are the weak one. I feel like spitting on you.’ Scorpion hesitated. Sub-zero coughed up a gallon of blood. He was sweating so badly even his blue ninja costume was soon becoming red. He eyesight weakened. His jaw felt as if he has ripped and stepped on it. Sub-Zero got up, to face another kick by scorpion. ‘Your soul is weak Sub-Zero, soon to break!!! The outcome of this fight doesn’t surprise me sub-zero. Khan, I have won the fight.’. Sub-Zero stared into khan’s eyes…
‘Very well, scorpion – you will have what you wanted, you may now join shang sung in his battle against earthrealm in mortal kombat. Make sure your army men pay me with the same respect you have given me.. NOW GO!… and for you subzero.. such a pity.. ha. Ha.. ha such a amusing fight. And you thought you can win…. Hya!’ As he said this he kicked sub-zero in his face.
‘Now you will be my slave!’ shao khan muttered. A surge of energy ran through subzero. He knew he could not fight this mind of shao khan. He fought it well, but he was not strong enough. ‘Now go! AND Aid shang sung!’… Sub-Zero rose to his feet and walked away.
Preface: Through out the years Sub-Zero worked with scorpion as slaves to shang sung and attacked earthrealm in mortal kombat. Sub-Zero also had gained imortalilty due to being a slave to a immortal demon. 500 years later, after the death of the champion kung loa. It was the tenth mortal kombat tournament, if outworld was to win this one, the portals of earth will open and earth will be apart and among the dark desolate expansion of outworld. In two days mortal kombat will begin… To travel Sub-Zero must board shang sungs ship of earth kombat fighters, all who will be travelled to Shang Sungs tropical island. He knew the ‘Chosen One’ will be there and he will face him. It did not bother him for the time will, come…
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Sub-Zero: Deep Conquest 3 – Kombat Begins
Sub-Zero stared deeply at scorpion. ‘We meet again scorpion. This time I will kill you… die!’. As he spoke sub-zero flipped on to the area in front of Shoa Khan. Scorpion screamed ‘COME HERE!’. Two serpent like creatures came in opposite directions. Sub-zero dodged them both with out suspecting the punch smashing in to his chest…
The ice ninja fell on the floor, weakened by Cyrax and now Scorpion.
‘Just Like Last time. You are the weak one. I feel like spitting on you.’ Scorpion hesitated. Sub-zero coughed up a gallon of blood. He was sweating so badly even his blue ninja costume was soon becoming red. He eyesight weakened. His jaw felt as if he has ripped and stepped on it. Sub-Zero got up, to face another kick by scorpion. ‘Your soul is weak Sub-Zero, soon to break!!! The outcome of this fight doesn’t surprise me sub-zero. Khan, I have won the fight.’. Sub-Zero stared into khan’s eyes…
‘Very well, scorpion – you will have what you wanted, you may now join shang sung in his battle against earthrealm in mortal kombat. Make sure your army men pay me with the same respect you have given me.. NOW GO!… and for you subzero.. such a pity.. ha. Ha.. ha such a amusing fight. And you thought you can win…. Hya!’ As he said this he kicked sub-zero in his face.
‘Now you will be my slave!’ shao khan muttered. A surge of energy ran through subzero. He knew he could not fight this mind of shao khan. He fought it well, but he was not strong enough. ‘Now go! AND Aid shang sung!’… Sub-Zero rose to his feet and walked away.
Preface: Through out the years Sub-Zero worked with scorpion as slaves to shang sung and attacked earthrealm in mortal kombat. Sub-Zero also had gained imortalilty due to being a slave to a immortal demon. 500 years later, after the death of the champion kung loa. It was the tenth mortal kombat tournament, if outworld was to win this one, the portals of earth will open and earth will be apart and among the dark desolate expansion of outworld. In two days mortal kombat will begin… To travel Sub-Zero must board shang sungs ship of earth kombat fighters, all who will be travelled to Shang Sungs tropical island. He knew the ‘Chosen One’ will be there and he will face him. It did not bother him for the time will, come…
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Sub-Zero: Deep Conquest 4 – Kombat Begins
In each of us there burns a soul of a warrior. In every generation a few are chosen to prove it. Centuries ago, in a time of darkness and fury, there existed a assassin sub-zero. Whose life now has been taken into the hands of shang sung, and put to battle in the sacred tournament MORTAL KOMBAT…
Sub-Zero stepped into shang suns boat. He walked into his room, he looked around his quarters. Pieces of wood were snapped and dust covered the bed. He walked out to find Shang Sung. The sorcerer was standing looking down at the one named Sonya. Sub-zero asked him…
‘Sorcerer, I do not wish to sleep in that filthy pig-sty.’
‘Do not tell me your opinion sub-zero, it is all you will see and get.’
‘Hmmm, what shall I do now, Master.’
‘I have looked into each of these pathetic warriors souls and three of them have the chance of changing the outcome of the tournament. The one they’re… her name is Sonya Blade, pretty thing isn’t she. And the two speaking there, Johnny Cage and Liu Kang. Those three will determine the outcome of the tournament…’
‘And what will I do to them.’
‘Break The rules without letting the elder gods know, specially watch out for the thunder god, Raiden. Kill the three chosen ones, sub-zero! Meet me at the ship storage basement. I will have Kano trick all of them to go there. Then we will pounce on them and FINISH them..’
‘Very well master’
‘Scorpion is there already, go!’
The ice ninja went down the stares, and as shang sung said the three chosen ones were there. Sub-Zero was next to Scorpion. The two looked at each other… Sub-Zero opened the door and stepped into the storage room. Jhonny cage spoke, ‘hey Sonya, I think you better get that thing ready..’ Sub-Zero stepped next to scorpion as scorpion did his pose, ready for the spear to come out. ‘Behold, Scorpion and Sub-Zero. Greatest of enemies but slaves under my power!..’. Slowly a disturbing noise was made from Scorpions hand. The three earth fighters stared at scorpions hand. Slowly his palm split open and spear came out. Liu Kang’s facial expressions changed as Sonya looked disgusted. The spear was still, then it opened what seemed to be a jaw. The three knew it wasn’t a spear but also a type of serpent. Sonya, took a gun out and told the shang sung and the two ninjas to step back. Doing so sub-zero stepped in front of scorpion and touched the gun gently, seconds later half of it froze. Sub-Zero pulled it apart, and out of nowhere a bolt of lightning hit the two ninjas, Raiden stood before them. ‘You should know that it is against the rules to attack my fighters with your hooligans! For it is against the rules of mortal kombat!’. Shang sung replied ‘Very well’. The three walked away with raiden. Sub-Zero, stared back at Shang Sung.
‘What now, master?’
‘Damn you raiden… Scorpion you will fight jhonny cage in the tournament, tommorow!’
‘What about me…’
‘You sub-zero, you will face liu kang, he reminds me of someone I despise, now go and rest for tomorrow is going to be a long day which you will need all you efforts in. Sub-Zero, will you give a open introduction for me at the beginning of the tournament? To show a taste of what your capable of?’
‘I will master, now I must rest’
The ice ninja walked into the room, and removed his ninja clothing and back into his casual clothes, black trousers. He went to sleep. In his dreams he can remember his family including his sister and baby brother. Then the dream turned different he was in a realm filled with fire, filled with hate and anger… This was foretelling his future. Is this place the netherealm?
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Sub-Zero: Deep Conquest 5 – Bad Dreams
‘Ice Man, Lin Kuei, Assassin, Lisa, Grand Master, Scorpion, Mother, Father… Sub-Zero!’ These words echoed again and again in Sub-Zeros head. Disturbing images replaced his dreams. ‘Wake Up, ninja!.. Wake Up!’ ; Sub-zero got up from his sleep, he shook his head and everything around him became clear. He was sat upright in his bed, looking up at one of Shang Sung’s servents.
‘Ice Ninja, please wake up. Your fight will be soon against Liu Kang.’
‘Hmm, already. What time is it?’
‘Its 12:10! We will be reaching the shores of shang sungs island soon.’
‘Pass me my clothes… Where’s scorpion?’
‘He’s training.’
‘Here sir your clothes!’
‘Thank You, I shall inform Shang sung of your kindness..’
The ice ninja sat and waited, watching Liu Kang. Soon the reached the shores. Sub-Zero met up with shang sung. The two guided the collection of earth fighters to the Main Kombat Hall. As the earth fighters gathered they sat down in neat dining tables, with food laid and cooked. Then shang sung spoke ‘Today you are here to protect your realm, this tournament is called Mortal Kombat. Some of you will even have the pleasure of meeting prince goro. Now.. a taste of whats to come.’ Soon a group of shang sungs ninjas raided the hall trashing everthing and making space in the middle. The earth fighters stepped back. Sub-Zero stepped forward as one of shang sung’s ninjas did so as well at the opposite end of the hall. The ninja warmed up stretching his muscles and ribs. Sub-Zero rose his hands in a Hapikido style fighting position. The ninja rose to his feet and jumped and tried to kick sub-zero, but then sub-zero prepared a ice ball and threw it at the ninja. Sub-zero slid to the right. And the ninja crashed into the floor next to shang sung. The ninjas head was split and his guts were spread across the room.. Blood trailed down the steps. Then Shang Sung Spoke ‘Flawless Victory!’.
Sub-zero walked away. In a corner in his mind – a spark of fear had been born for the first time he had felt fear. The ninja walked down the corridor, into the training room past goro. In 2 Hours he will face Liu Kang…
2 Hours passed… Sub-zero was lead into the Kombat arena where he will face liu kang. Liu Kang was already, there. Sub-Zero bowed before him and threw a punch, Liu Kang defended him self. The Fight grew stronger and violent. The arena was a blue hall, whilst fighting a man planted a Bucket of water on the side near the doorway. This man walked away. The fight continued.
‘Your soul is weak Liu Kang, soon to break!!!’
’Challenging me is your flaw, ice-man!’
Sub-zero threw several punches at liu kang. Then sub-zero kicked liu kang in the face… a blood stain was left in liu kangs nose, liu kang backed a little bit, And dodged one of sub-zeros lethal ice kicks. The moment Liu missed this, the kick went and rammed into one of the pillar like shapes in the hall ; thus smashing it to pieces. Sub-zero ran up one of the walls and hit liu kang from behind. With rage liu kang kicked sub-zero. Sub-zero fell. He got up. And placed his hands in the air. A cold breeze swept past Liu and a blue mist was formed. The blue mist circled Sub-Zero. The mist entered his hands. Objects around him froze, never to return into its original state. The room temperature was dropping fast. Following his thoughts and what kitana mentioned earlier to him, Liu picked up the water bucket which the old man placed and threw it at sub-zero. The H2O liquid was frozen by the temperature which surrounded sub-zero and morphed itself into a spike. The spike stabbed through sub-zero, causing blood to spit at Liu’s face. Everything faded for him. He looked around. He’s sweat froze soon there was total darkness. Sub-zero woke up and looked around him. It was just like his dream he had the night before. Raging fire, which clings on to the surface like wild animals. This was definitely the netherealm. He remembers being killed in the tournament by liu kang, the pain which surged through his body. Now he needs to find a way out of this ‘sealed’ realm for his freedom. He looked around him and thought to him self ‘Why must this happen to me!’.
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Sub-Zero: Deep Conquest 6 – Netherealm
Words from author: Last time in deep conquest, our warrior sub-zero fought against the shoalin monk Liu Kang. Doing so in a brutal battle he lost. Thus being free from the hands of shang sung his soul and his body has entered the netherealm. A acidic realm much like out world yet its burning fire like environment does not effect the dead. Sub-zero will now have do find a portal which will lead him back his home, earthrealm. These portals are very rare and only occur a every couple of years. Since the neatherealm is encountering this uncanny gateways it is also weakening the neatherealm’s dimensional fabric. Sub-zero is not only searching for his trip home but a gateway of freedom.
‘Damn this,’ Sub-zero whispered to him self kicking a rock. The ice ninja kept walking up ahead until he heard voices. He looked around him and saw a shadows. He ran up around a corner of a rock and saw three females. They were in some sort of spar or hot tub. The steam touched sub-zeros face. He walked up to these women.
‘Excuse me! Who are you and where am I?’ The lin kuei ninja spoke.
‘Oooh a man?’ One of them replied
‘Look women I do not have time for your silly games! Answer my question or suffer if be!’
‘Fine, your in the netherealm! We are a group of servents for the master’ One spoke.
‘Netherealm…? Who is this master you speak of?’ The ninja spoke softly.
‘Quan Chi!’
‘Who is this quan chi?’
‘He is a sorcerer, sub-zero. Much like shang sung.’
‘How do you know my name?’
‘Every one does, the master knows everyone that enters and leaves this hell hole’
‘Hmm, where can I find him?’
‘The black-molten chamber?’
‘Where in the hell is that women?’
‘Follow the chill running down your spine’
Sub-zero looked behind him and there was what appeared to be a cave-like gateway. He turned back where the three females were. As he done this one of the females got up. He stared at her. The female put on her robe and walked over to sub-zero.
‘Let me introduce my self, ninja. I am SIAN. I am a assassin as well as quan chi’s servant.’
‘You are no use for me right now!’
‘Let me just tell you this, quan chi is expecting you. And he wants to test your skill. Once you enter that cave you will be faced with some of quan chi’s best ninjas. Defeat them and you will meet quan chi. Ask him what you wish. But with everything there is a price. Please pay that price fully.’
‘Thank You, I will be on my way.’
The ice ninja entered the cave he kept walking and then he heard a noise. From above a warrior droped down. Sub-zero stepped back. This warrior was a different type of ninja. He looked at him. His hair was on fire, his fists was on fire yet it seems like he is not being hurt.
‘Allow me to introduce my self to you sub-zero, I am flame! Master of fire. YOU WILL BURN at my hands!’. With seconds this fighter threw a ball of fire at sub-zero. This hit sub-zero. He fell to the floor. He got up and the fire ninja kicked him, sub-zero went flying and hit against a rock wall. He got up and spoke ‘What ever you are, you will die.’ Flame got up and did a double kick, as this happened Sub-zero did his ICE-CLONE. Pieces of ice flew everywhere. On pointed piece pierced Flame’s eyes. The fire warrior backed up. ‘AARRRGHH! Damn you sub-zero’. Sub-zero stood back and moved his arms around the air whilst flame was shouting his head off. ‘Eat this Flame’, Sub-zero threw a massive ice ball at the fire warrior, once he froze sub-zero kicked him. ‘Flawless victory’ he whispered to him self. Sub-zero stared ahead of him wondering what his next fighter will be. He kept walking and this time he heard hisses. He looked around, and he thinks he knows who this might be, he has heard about a warrior that can morph to be camouflaged, it has to be Reptile. With a hiss a green ninja stepped from the darkness. Sub-zero thought to himself ‘Reptile, how did he get here! He was working with shang sung in mortal Kombat? Unless liu kang might have defeated him.’ Sub-zero got up without fear, he thought to himself once more, can he really beat Reptile?
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Sub-Zero: Deep Konquest 7 – Reptile
Sub-zero, stared into the darkness. A green ninja stepped forth. ‘I will finishh… you sub-zero nice and slowly. But before that why don’t we get warmed up??’ The reptile spoke. The ice ninja stood back and he then realized that reptile has a slight change. He stared into the dark green eyes of the lizard. Sub-zero noticed that Reptiles skin was not how it usually is. The ninja has scales. Then sub-zero spoke.
‘What in the blue hell has happened to you reptile??’
‘Im.. mu.. mutating!’
‘How and why does this genetic change happen now?’
‘Why should i tell you ICE-MAN!’
‘I’ve been called that too many times!! Shut Up, Reptile and speak up.’
‘Very well, Quan-Chi told me that if i try to defeat you he will give me powers of a great reptilian warrior. Thats why im mutating. Soon i will be a real reptile – A warrior who will devour all human flesh!! He Ha!’
‘Damn you…’
‘Now shut up sub-zero and fight!!’
‘Im starting to dispise you reptile! After all we did work together with shang sung…’
‘That was when i was his slave, now im quan-chi’s!’
‘@&^%**!! Lets begin kombat!’
With one punch the ice-ninja went flying across the enviornment smashing into a rock wall, The lizard got up and took a piece of cobalt rock and threw it at sub-zero. Sub-zero started moving about dodging reptiles fast kicks. The ice ninja grew furious every second. Sub-zero flipped in air and punched Reptile. Reptile stood back, Sub-zero stepped forward and started doing various punches in reptiles chest and face. Sub-zero stepped back and started to begin a combo of tae kwon do kicks. Then sub-zero ripped apart reptiles mask, sub-zero stood back looking at reptiles disturbing face. Sub-zero took his knee and bashed it against Reptiles face. Sub-zero stepped back and spoke once more.
‘I thinks thats enough reptile, i do not want to kill you!’
‘Damn you, Sub-zero! I will kill you!’
‘Then it shall be, you will die!’
‘Watch me!’
Sub-zero stared at reptile as he got up. The lizard warrior ripped his ninja outfit leaving him unmasked fully. Sub-zero stared back at reptile. Reptile got up and spoke ‘Watch me… MUTATE!’. Reptiles face deformed and his hands soon turned into claws his mouth grew longer! His eyes changed… Now the battle is just begining!..
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Sub-Zero: Deep Conquest 8 – Reptiles Defeat
One of the ninjas hit the othere on there face. Leaving a big blood mark across there, hand sub-zero stared at reptile taking a deep breath. Reptile walked towards sub-zero with a disturbing hiss, as he did this Reptile took his finger nail and scraped it across sub-zero’s eyes. Sub-zero was blinded in one eye.
‘Arrrrgh! Damn you reptile!’
‘He he he… Ha ha!’
Sub-zero stepped back and did his ice-clone. A move which the socerer shang tsung teached him. Sub-zero stood back and covered him self as the peices of ice smashed on reptiles face. Reptile was screaming, sub-zero thought to him self ‘It worked???’. Sub-zero got up and broke a rock-like spike from the ground doing this he moved closer to reptile and impaled it in his stomach! The cries of pain echoed in the netherealm as the reptilian warrior was erased completely. Blood trickled down the floor… Peices of torn flesh hung out just beside the intestines which sub-zero was seeing. Sub-zero spoke to him self ‘Fatality.. Flawless Victory.’ The warrior walked on, for the first time he felt abit hot so he took his inner-ninja top off, he was completely un-masked. Sweat trickeled down his forhead. Then a voice was heard from the darkness… ‘ENTER sub-zero! You have won!!?’. The ice ninja walked on further.. what waits in the dark… He has no clue.
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WORDS FROM AUTHOR: Thanks, thats the end of Volume 1 of Sub-Zero Deep Conquest. Please check the MKC Board often to see if the next episodes are posted or just e-mail me at flamemxtreme@yahoo.co.uk – Thanks for reading. Its your thoughts that keep me writing these fan-fic so don’t hesitate to make comments (even if there bad :D) – Thank you for your time.
